Corrections – 3

Corrected B2 version:
Hi, can you explain who can manipulate us through media, social media, and YouTube, and how they do it?

C1 Natural Conversational version:
Hi! Could you explain who might be trying to manipulate us through the media, social platforms, and YouTube—and how they go about it?

🟢 Why it's better:

• "Might be trying to" adds nuance—it sounds more natural and less absolute.

• "Social platforms" is a smoother synonym for "social media."

• "Go about it" is a natural phrase meaning “how they do it.”

Corrected B2 Version:

First of all, thank you for the correction. It was really helpful. And yes, I’d like to see some real examples.

🔸 C1 Conversational Version:

Thanks so much for the correction—it was super helpful! And yes, I’d love to take a look at some real examples.

📝 Notes:

• "the correction" – you need “the” because you’re referring to something specific.

• "I’d love to" sounds more natural and enthusiastic in conversation.